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Paper 1 assessment learner response

question 2)  Under Amour   Question 3) Galaxy   Question 4) Tatler - need more revisions on  Question 5) Blake widow  - more revision needs to be one    1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). analysing language  more specifics   2) Look at the  mark scheme for this assessment . For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify  three  points that you could have referred to in your answer. the central imagine  slogan  lightening   3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use the mark scheme to write down the main  narrative theories  and how we can link them to the Galaxy advert CSP.  equilibrium, disequilibrium , new equilibrium  Prop's    Intertextuality    4) Now look at Question 4 - Tatler and social/cultural contexts. Use the mark scheme to identify  three  points you could have made in your answer here. central imagine  cover line title   5) On Section B, focus on Question 7

statement of intent

Introduction The title will be Coterie A Sri Lankan girl with makeup on. It will challenge stereotypes as you don't often see a Sri Lankan girl on the front cover of a magazine. My main story will be about makeup and surgery as it can change your whole face which means that you don't have to feel insecure anymore, it can boost your confidence within yourself and make you stand out, it will give you the face and looks that you have always dreamt about. Media Language The cover lines talk about plastic surgery as the demand for plastic surgery is increasing rapidly. Plastic surgery helps to get your dream look and the way you wish to look. This will appeal to the upper class as they have the money to afford plastic surgery. Props- the model is holding lip gloss in her hands, her calm expression while holding the lip gloss in her hands shows her interest in makeup. Setting- the purpose of the plain white background is to make the model the centre of attention as it will make her a